Assignment 17A- Elevator Pitch No. 2
Here is the link to my elevator pitch: https://youtu.be/_AKVfAXn78A
The feedback I received made me feel like my product could have some real potential. I think that I received two important pieces of feedback. The first was that those who reviewed my pitch did not realize how much females spend on nail services. This number is very high and I think it is important for people to know the actual number. The second was that one of my viewers said that he liked my idea so much that he showed it to their girlfriend. It made me happy that I could reach out to those who were not even in the class. The only thing that I changed for this second elevator pitch is that I tried to add in more data and statistics to let others know how much nail services are. I added more statistics because it seemed that that was something my viewers liked/commented about the most about my first pitch.
The feedback I received made me feel like my product could have some real potential. I think that I received two important pieces of feedback. The first was that those who reviewed my pitch did not realize how much females spend on nail services. This number is very high and I think it is important for people to know the actual number. The second was that one of my viewers said that he liked my idea so much that he showed it to their girlfriend. It made me happy that I could reach out to those who were not even in the class. The only thing that I changed for this second elevator pitch is that I tried to add in more data and statistics to let others know how much nail services are. I added more statistics because it seemed that that was something my viewers liked/commented about the most about my first pitch.
Hello Madison! I liked that you added more statistics surrounding the nail services women get as they inform those of us who don't have to worry about these things what women pay. I can really see your product coming to life in nail salons across the country if you ever find a way to create a prototype and market it in an effective manner. Overall your pitch was great!
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